A very sweet poem. I liked how the last two lines rhymed. I enjoyed your choice of words, very unique, and well written! 5/5

mandy :)

I likk this poem it is very sweet. Nicely worded.

5/5

A very touching and heart filled poem. A true story of what love is, with all the grace and serenity of one's heart. You have managed to capture the readers eye and their hearts with this poem. Truly Amazing!

Thank you my friend..

Indeed your word choices in this piece were superlative! Heartfelt to say the least. Very good write.

I agree with the other members great choice of words..and touching poem..loved it..5/5