You're young yet so in time you will know love. It may not seem that way now but it will change. Only thing I see is in 1st verse, 3rd line know should be known. Well done Austin.

I can feel the pessimism in this piece but I think we all go through this stage, thinking that nobody will love us or that it will come our way, but just like Sylvia said it's still early & when you find the right person you'll know that it's right. Great job

Very touching write... gives a feeling of loneliness ... well expressed.

Life filled with love,
Not a care in the world.
Too bad I've never known it,
Always below the weather not above.

>nice beginning...we will all know it..and believe me some times when u knw it..it wont be too bad that u didn b4 hha

>>2nd stanza was kind of sad..and i loved
the opening life of it..was kind of like a short image

Feelings I've known forever
-Sorrow, pain, and loneliness-

>>this is SO bitter..reveals hard experience
and sad times..enough not to see hope

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Regret fills the lines in my face,
>>this is my fav expression...so true..i wouldnt have expressed this idea any better..impressed me

ur last line was kind of a bomb..like u fell out of a spit of hope..very sad writing but a realy good one
loves ur work
5/5