Can I Have This Dance?

by huddy   Jul 26, 2010


I saw you wade across the red carpeted floor
You walked so gently my heart began to pound
This fragility, a princess in white robes
Can i have this dance,
Can I have this dance with you?

She shone like a glow worm and her innocence showed
Prettier than anything, I have to take you home
You see I come from a far and this is how we roll
So can I have this dance,
Can I have this dance with you?

Mine isn't lies, it's true as it sounds
I will wait for this dance up to the next round
You move like a swan wading in lillies
You shine so bright for you dance like a queen
............So let me have this dance; your hand in mine
And dance through the night forever in a rhyme

You'll be my star and I'll be your sky
Can I have this dance,
Can I please have this dance with you.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Good one mate , ive been married for 25yrs and i still feel that way about my lovely lady. This was a nice sweet poem, nice and fresh feel about it, well done. Grant

    • 8 years ago

      by huddy

      Thanks Grant!!! I am glad I was able to capture your feeling for your lucky lady in my limited wording...thanks for the encouragement :)

  • 13 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I like the part about, "Can I have this dance with you?" I have a friend at work who uses that phrase about; "This is how we roll". I have started using it myself. :)

    • 8 years ago

      by huddy

      Thank you so much RainbowSlider. I am truly appreciative of the comment. Sorry its taken me over 6 years to get back to you.:(

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