Interesting write, makes you think & puts some unique metaphors to everyday things/feelings. A neat perspective, & a great job.

The last two verses are so sad but they are true. Well done.

Ben
So much deep thoughts in this piece. Makes the reader also stop and think.
Good job!
Take Care
Cindy

Very well painted, succinct yet laden with emotion.

:/ this is beautifully sad ..

i was caught by the 1st stanza and did directly give me a sign THIS is gna b sad.. and yes it was

I loved tho ur words..how u worked it out..just amazing

5/5

Well Benny ]: that made me no so happy at the end. Very sad poem indeed. I say I take you out for ice cream so you will write happy stuff after :] Anywho I liked this piece. I liked how you asked a question and gave an answer. Very clever my friend. Nice work :] Nik