If wounds really heal up,
as time passes by;

then the broken heart, would
have never died with a blind eye

^^
How come you know so much about life already, you young girl? I am awestruck by your capacity to write down the essence of life and love this way. Keep writing Nana, no matter what, you don't need anyone confirming your talent or helping you in any way, you shine, sweetheart, you shine all by yourself..a bright star in the world of poetry:)

* big hug*

5/5 Ingrid

If wounds really heal up,
as time passes by;

then the broken heart, would
have never died with a blind eye.
- those couple lines were amazing! infact, so was the whole piece, however those couple lines just stood out ! i loved it.

ps. thanks for reading my work :D

This poem has amazing free flow with great word choice and I really enjoyed reading it

I love it it has a great flow my favorite stanza
is

"And I grow between bitten thorns,
where the undone duties gather
above my blur scene."

5/5 amazing poem great potential.

Awww... this is such a sad poem but sooo well-written!
You have the ability describe such hard situations and feelings... When I read your poetry I think of feelings that I never knew could be expressed...

I loved this stanza the most:

"But time heals not, what doesn't
really have a cure.
For minds shall read, but never
feel what hurt may hearts endure."

It has so much meaning! Very well done my friend!

I think this piece is so mature..

The ideas are brought yo life by your touch!
And it flowed awesomely!
FIVE :)