Comments : You ?

  • 13 years ago

    by Deana

    Its been so long with you inside my heart

    and through my dreams you have crossed

    thousands of miles

    I loved these lines...when we love it is as if the person is with you in every moment of your life, very sincere and heartfelt. A wonderful write.

  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    That was a really cute piece :) i read it twice because i enjoyed it so much the first time!

    "and through my dreams you have crossed

    thousands of miles

    through each walkable mile you have

    brought me a million smile "
    - that was my favourite part of the piece, it was original, and it put a smile on my face! nice work :D

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You bring to my heart confidence through fear

    and laughter amid my saddest tears

    I believe you shine the sunlight along my night

    you travel the world through this loving mind

    ^^
    These lines are so unique..somehow I find something inside your words, Nana..the strength to go on is always so clear in your words. How brave you are:)

    When you really love a man this si waht it feels like..to find it all in that particular person, you wrote that down so well:)

    I am so happy to have you back here, I have not commented this much in ages:)

    Love you hun,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    THis is so beautiful the only thing I would change bis to make smile ...smiles

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    How romantic and vivd this piece is!
    and the title just gave it a vague touch!

    5/5 :D