U even started this with a very very strong beginning...that caught my whole attention..

u have really done a gr8 work over here which I realy admire.

claps for such an amazing piece
5/5
KEEp this work flowing !!

The light will shine through eventually, if you wait patiently. A really sad write, each word filled with lots of emotion; but you wrote it perfectly & everything linked together very nicely. Well done

Austin
Your sadness crys from this piece.

Losing what I've known,
I try so hard to hold on
But feeling so alone
With everything now gone.

This stanza really caught my eye. It is so hard when you have lost so much. You can feel alone even in a room full of people.
Great job!
take care
Cindy