JAd..waw..really this flowed so well... this is what i love..this type..images drawn by simple words..yet DEEP profound expressions..that flow amazingly..

I have felt sadness just sinking from well to well u know..u drew very sad images over here...and i was realy impressed by each line then ..get impressed more by the line it followed so was ffunny cause every time i copied a stanza as my fav..another blew me off...

anyway these are my favvvv of favorites

A smile transforms here.
Replaced with life's bitter.
A place where dreams become fears;
All emotion are littered
>>how amazing !! dreams becomes ffears... u have a bright future jad .

Integrity falls apart,
Losing what ones found.

>>>how DEEPLY sad..

Emotions tear the heart,
>>oh yes they do...this is a sharp line..
loved it
Crying-the only sound.
>>made me feel alone lol..gr8 job

5/5
KEEP THIS going

JAd..waw..really this flowed so well... this is what i love..this type..images drawn by simple words..yet DEEP profound expressions..that flow amazingly..

I have felt sadness just sinking from well to well u know..u drew very sad images over here...and i was realy impressed by each line then ..get impressed more by the line it followed so was ffunny cause every time i copied a stanza as my fav..another blew me off...

anyway these are my favvvv of favorites

A smile transforms here.
Replaced with life's bitter.
A place where dreams become fears;
All emotion are littered
>>how amazing !! dreams becomes ffears... u have a bright future jad .

Integrity falls apart,
Losing what ones found.

>>>how DEEPLY sad..

Emotions tear the heart,
>>oh yes they do...this is a sharp line..
loved it
Crying-the only sound.
>>made me feel alone lol..gr8 job

5/5
KEEP THIS going

Austin
so many sad emotions you have captured with this piece.
Good job!
Take Care
Cindy