I actually think this poem is well written. The best form of poetry is when we aren't thinking about it and we are just letting out our feelings. It truly does help, and the raw emotion really makes for a great poem. So I think it was a great write.

Mmmmmmm lets keep ur opinion aside..u have done such a gr8 job " expressing ur feelings"
I ffound this emotional..and penned in a very honest way.
maybe some changes litte little ones will make it so mch better but as it is..its just perfect due to how much honest and deep ur words sounded

i love ur poems
i always can relate
5/5