Comments : As He Passes Away

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is touching so sad to read but nicely written..5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I have to say this is a very touching poem.

    Heartbreaking and very emotional. I kept relating this poem to my own experiences which is why I feel connected to it.

    It is well written and I think a wonderful poem.

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