Comments : Master of Disguise

  • 11 years ago

    by iRobbiee

    This is really good, no one ever knows what's going on inside..they see yu and they just think oh she's pretty shes happy nothing is wrong w. Her.. And I know it might be hard to let everybody in because yu might have to add an extra stitch to the mask becuase either they don't understand or they make it worse.. Very well written.. I feel yu on the mask..I have my own mask as well

  • 11 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    Excellent expression.
    The flow was perfect;
    With feelings seeming unforced.

    Well Done.

  • 11 years ago

    by Simikiel

    They come from experience but then most good poets do lol such as yours seem to

  • 11 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    Great job 10\10
    creepy me stay inside

  • 11 years ago

    by shadow

    Relatable is an understatement. Well done.

  • 11 years ago

    by OmniLotus

    So i read this piece and i was in awe, so i read it again..aloud, as spoken poetry with gusto n flow and it sounded really powerfull.

    ;] love it