Another parrt..how interesting this is ...

i loved how u narrated this

Four walls squared my waiting room,
a silent sentry post.
Will there soon be filled a glass
sipped from to make a toast?

and the stanza b4 the last..forgot to copy

what I enjoy about ur work
is that u make it lyrical u knw..its realy enjoyable..
wil u write some romantic short stories too..haha

5/5

I'm still pleased and still excited for the rest. I feel like I'm reading a Harry Potter book and I'm waiting for the next one to come out. Just as brilliant as the others dear. Nik