Comments : Lonely with You

  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I also love this poem. I can totally relate to this!! The words in this poem really tugged at the heartstrings.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Ur title is beautifully contradicted and I have a poem under the same subject..in which i say

    "as i walk this road with you
    i can feel a better lonesome"

    and u truly revealed this feeling in a sad sad heartfelt way..the repetition of the lines really suited the flow at some points and at some others made the flow off..but doesnt matter much for me..because I just loved what kind of emotions u worded

    i love this piece as well
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Why????? if there is an answer to that you shouln't feel this way....if your answer is because of him, you deserve more...i hope you find happiness you deserve.....good poem