I really found this one of the most beautiful dark poems, tho wasnt so dark but you have these verses which the reader ends up wondering and putting questions.

very interesting and truly descriptive and u got it all well...
im impressed
Hypnotized by her eyes,
She planted her kiss,
staring down the abyss,
my heart scorched the skies.

All roads crossed seemed blessed that day.
My chosen love, beautiful as day.

that was my fav fav part
reallyyyyy loved that stanza
5/5keep going