This poem was gd just nto flowing as the ones i commented b4..and i guess you are talking about getting over alcoholism ? or maybe am totally wrong

and in both cases i did like the word choice and the PErsonal choice as well.
gd job
5/5

Wow this is amazing how I relate right now and a lot from a long time ago,,,u are a great poet I loved it greatly fantastically wonderfully done splendid work 5/5

This has hit me harder than you probably will ever know. i know someone who is dealing with having his last drink and it's a struggle everyday.

wonderful poem!!