QUARTER TO NINE

by Brix Ambray   Sep 3, 2010


My heart is melting
Burning with affection
As the clock tick
On this blessed evening
I miss my girl
Needing and wanting her
At this very hour
She's on my mind
Just to write poem
My world stop
All because of her
I'm walking the light
Heading for a sign
At quarter to nine..
We'll be just fine.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Love Panda

    The start of this poem is very strong but the ending is very weak..Other than that i like it. It would have been nice if it was a little longer..short lines are a good style for this kind of poem, it makes it sound ever so sweet. Not bad.

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