I just love the title, I love the truth your poem revealed.
At certain points some words sounded forced but maybe by coincidence, like happens with me.

I found this amazingly meaningful, and I truly can relate to it.
you played ur roll so well..and i still think the title left a gr8 impression.

well done
5/5

Wow!!! You must have won that contest, because this poem was so awesome!!! I just loved the WHOLE thing. There isn't one part of this poem that I don't like. Great Write, as always! :)