Comments : Midnight Madness Part 9:"Lake Waters Cold and Deep"

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Woaaaaaaaaah this was better than the part b4 which I already found gr8 !!

    but this is unfair i want the next part..cause this

    Now standing with a cup of tea
    I put it down to steep.
    My thoughts where once again just like
    lake waters cold and deep.

    leaves u unsatisfied ...want the following events
    lol
    either submit now or email me them Ron :D
    loves ur work!

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    And just forgot to say : PERFECT RHYMING