Comments : The Monster of Inebriation

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Maybe this is for a frnd..but due to he darkness and sadness of the poem
    I think u shouldnt put it under this category /
    maybe sad ? or dark ?

    now the poem..oh man was really good, tho i felt like it was a free verse and a rhyming one a the same time...but i wont comment over that.

    the way u opened it was just amazing and sad..and ilove how u repeated the 1st stanza and changed the last two lines..

    more over wat i liked as well was

    I know we all struggle and I know we all slip up
    Some of us cope while some shout bottom's up

    ^^^
    this.so so so so true...some ppl cop with it and some ppl let it out.

    I found this a very interesting poem
    5/5