Rid myself of the world
Yeah, its crossed my mind
But everyone tells me
"It will get better just give it time"

That was my most favorite part. Its true too. Thats all they say. Your poem was fantastic. I loved everything about it!!! Good Work

This is beautiful.
So sad but so beautiful.

Speechless.

5/5 x

Wow, super good! The feelings just seem to leap from the words. I like the play on words at the very end as well. Clever. Keep on writing!

I really like this poem! It flows well and I can feel the pain behind it, and I can relate to it. Great job :)