Comments : Secrets

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    Hmm...A thought provoker in a sort of way. It is true though that we can not hold on to all the secrets that we have, because in the end we will try to keep them all inside and will not want to be very truthful with good friends or loved ones. A bit of sadness seemed to touch the lines in some parts which made the poem that much better. Good job and keep writing.