Comments : House of Cards

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    A great poem. I love the metaphors in this poem, they were all helpful for the reader to understand what is really happening. The flow was good as well.

    "With pain the mirror
    had to become
    a window to see thru."

    This was my favorite line as you could feel the sadness that the writer is portraying in these three lines. A good write with a good message behind it. Good job and keep writing.