When all is done, as brass walks by,
my actions I explain.
>> ur last lines been worded in a very very perfect way !!

Its then I yearn, how to return
from madness in my brain.
>>> Omg thsi alone stands as a poem

I am really impressed again by this piece..its brillaint..
the wording and the rhyming are perfect..I really think ur a prince wen it comes to choose rhyming words

5/5

Brilliant, visceral look into the mind of a soldier trapped in the madness of battle and all the permanent mental wounds created as a result.

5/5