Comments : Dont let go

  • 13 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    I really liked this one. I love how you wanted to stay in the darkness, but at the same time it made me sad that no one would stay there with you willingly. You shouldn't have to beg someone to hold you tight if someone would willingly do it.

    "If you would like someone to stay in the darkness with I don't mind being by your side. Don't worry I won't let not one beam of light get through."

  • 13 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    I really liked this one. I love how you wanted to stay in the darkness, but at the same time it made me sad that no one would stay there with you willingly. You shouldn't have to beg someone to hold you tight if someone would willingly do it.

    "If you would like someone to stay in the darkness with I don't mind being by your side. Don't worry I won't let not one beam of light get through."