Beautiful poem we all sometimes go through a period of feeling loneliness

You definitely made your essential points
quite essentially...
so sad.....'-(
.......maybe take a deep breath now and then?... followed, of course, by exhaling....;~)

Definitely had that sad tone throughout, I have always loved your style and simple imagination - I always think the lines on our palms are interesting - you wouldn't guess how meaning there is behind them. I would have almost liked a separate poem on that, however you took it in a different direction , but I loved it either way. A brilliant write although penned with such sadness.

This is very, very, good =) I feel your sadness and pain...I really enjoyed this.

--Hannah

This Is An Amazing Poem.
Dont Let ANYBODY tell You Diferently.
I Loved It And Such Raw Emotion!
Keep Writing, PLEASE?!?:)
Im Going To Keep Reading Your Poems=D
5/5
It Would Be Great If You Could Comment And Rate My Last Poem? THANKS!

Much Love, Jessi.

Midnight Blue

My world within the arms
of midnight blue
dangling hopelessly upon
palm lines
-unread-
>> you have made up some very new
poetic expressions.. I don't think I have
ever read such descriptive lines..dangling hope;essy upon
palm lines? VERY sad..very original for me..!
Really catchy

Forever ...
perhaps only a breath away
teetering on the edge of broken lines
and the fall -
of a final rose petal
>> I feel like some one
so broken over here..a very sad
stanza..still adding more
hopeless and helpless bitterness..

Oh sky !
How does the beauty of your moon
still hang
`neath my rain> WOw...I am left speechless here..

And the twinkle of your stars
shine
`neath the darkness of my shadows
>such an unfair image aint it?..thats
why they say even wen deep inside ur heart
is dim...the sun will be shining still!

I,
a bitter lonely soul
dying -
within the arms
of midnight blue
>>I can't find better words..to say what I think
of this poem..I no bet can see my self
in this piece
as much as others would see themselves.
> offcourse at certain levels..because in this piece
I have seen someone who's life is bitterely dim..
suffering alone within their unpleasnt life, amid the
beauty of this world.
But this remains, my personal image..due
to my personal experience..sorry for this long comment but..I think
ur a very inspiring poet!

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It's been a while since I've read your poems and have to admit I missed them. I can't add to what everyone else has said but this was magnificent as always
excellent

Beautifully sad, as with all of your poems it stirs the heart , it reminds me of why I love poetry! Feelings, real and to the core! wonderful!

The depth of your words has left me sad...powerful

The thing is, this here poem stir deep emotions within my heart, its so deep its unlawful, really lost for words!

This is emotionally beautiful but also incredibly sad. It touched me deeply and gave me great inside to how you must be feeling. You worded this brilliantly and I like the layout. A stunning write Lu :-)

Danika.