The despair conveyed in your words is overwhelming. And all is destroyed by it. All too often I've have been there... very moving!

5/5

Very sad....this was absolutely a very sad piece-again. but worded in a very beautiful way..that touched my heart.
the flow was really gd..and the poem was not forced at all.

Chaos takes over my mind,
Enveloping my every move.
Wasting all of my time
Killing all things ever known.

^^^^
that was my fav..got to me..
5/5
cheer it