My Friend

by Beautiful Chaos   Sep 30, 2010


I cried, but you weren't there,
Not there to hold,
To hug,
To love.

I searched everywhere,
Land and sea,
Heart and mind,
Only faint whispers.

Until my eyes breached the sky,
There you were,
Soothing my soul,
Among the stars....

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  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Very simply written, able to plunge each reader into his or her own emotional world. Excellent

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Kay is right...this poem could be taken so many ways...I thought it was about a friends death and you can still feel her spirit, then my second guess was even God!

    Your writing is beautiful!

  • 13 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    How beautiful. It's as though you could be speaking of a couple of things here, a friend who has completed the journey, or finding a friend in the earth and its beauty or simply even God. Truly a comforting poem however it is taken. Great Job

    Take Care,
    Kay

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