Hahahahahahaha!

Lmaoooooooooooo hahaahahahaha
and i was like..ABBBY? whts this title is all about and ..looooooooooooool

oh man u rock..shall I nominate this?
hahahaha welll ok 5.5 :P

Write this as a sentence and use many elipses.

In fact just make it a quote.

Are you one of those people who think short, free verse poems should just be quotes?

If this was a quote, it would be racist. Poetry, through its contsruction, allows much more freedom of thought. Also, elipses are for dreamy, uncertain, vague people can't express themselves clearly. Usually.

Hahaha, it seems I can't take critique well either.

And, yes, this poem is hilarious. I think its one of the best I've ever written. That's saying a lot about what I think of my work.

...Like...

HAHAHA! I did notice. I thought we had a lot of Asians in California! You guys are crazy Asian land in comparison.
I agree about making this a poem and not a quote. It would be racist as a quote.
Why is that?
Huh.

Perfect way to break up the lines into fragmented thought. You have a real knack for that, home girl.

Definitely makes the reader think. I know Melbourne is in Australia and I'm guessing you were talking about some kind of celebration hence the title, I have no idea... the meaning of the poem may have been stated in the previous comments? , but It's interesting to try to figure your words out myself.