Comments : Our piece of time

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Ron, there is not much I can say about this other than these are words anyone would love to hear from the person they love. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    My comment is up there with Sylvia. The meaning of the poem runs very deep to the writer as we the readers try and comprehend what you have written, and you have written a very heartfelt piece that truly shows your love for this person whomever they may be. Good job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Love is sometimes better in simple words, wiith real emotions. I felt this fit the bill perfectly