Impressive! This is a wonderful tribute to a lost friend or family member. The evoking sadness stirs one heart in every line as the reader reads the passage. Also another key point would be the imagery you used. You were very depictive as you tried to describe what everything around you felt like now, which turn all the glories of April into an sorrowful downcast of a twist of fate. Once again you have penned a wonderful piece. Good job and keep writing.

Death is such a sad thing...and to be honest I'm qiute jealous of your title here, because I loved it and I thought to myself "hmmm that title could go go anywhere". I wish I had chose it because it was pretty clever seeings how April wouldn't be someones sad month! Its spring and gorgeous!....terribly sorrow about your loss, I like this poem. It seemed like a free style kkind of writing yet it had a really nice flow to it!
I enjoyed

Nana,

This was very touching, I am too tired to make an in dept comment, hun. I work such long hours, but wanted to leave you a little note on here, so that you know I haven't forgotten you:)

Nature lost its meaning, as I caught
April dying in your eyes..

^^
This struck me as very meaningful, and a very deep feeling you portray.

I am so sorry for your loss, sweetheart:(

* big hug*

5/5 Ingrid
ps: It's a beauty, but you know that already, don't you :0)

Wow... I'm speechless. This poem is so powerful and deep.... It really affected me... I love it... You express such sad emotions so beautifully... and I loved how you connected it to nature.. It's so well-written... I wouldn't change a word!
I am really sorry for your loss and I hope you are doing okay.

Beautiful poem sweetie... You always continue to inspire me :) *huggss*

Great poem.... very deep and meaningful

"In April each morning would shine with rain"
"In April each night would end with thick snow"
- I think you needa comma after April and i think if you change 'each' to every it would read nicer.

"In April each night would end with thick snow
only to bury the few paths that I know..
Then I get lost through lonely
endless years as more Aprils
dry the grief of my tears.."
- WOW ! What a powerful stanza this is, bottling so much emotion and sadness. Your words are truly magical nana, this is beautiful!

I love the repetition those last few lines. This was such an emotion packed piece nana, a truly sad story! I loved it ...

This is a beautiful poem with powerful imagery. :-) I loved reading it. I'm quoting here, "May you never know—or if experienced, forget—the river of tears that run deep within your amorous heart that bleeds red with the blood of our Savior." :-) 5/5 Hugz