I'll Whisper

by Squeegeeviolet   Oct 13, 2010


I've tried to move on, but its something I cannot do
Because no matter what I say or think , I only want you
I�m dependent on those feelings, I feel everyday
Because without the I'm lost and my hopes go astray
You�re the one I don't want to let go
Cause you everything I need, Your all I know
So forever ill whisper
Ill whisper I love you
So i hope you hear me calling
Because baby, you know my whispers true

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  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Cute poem, and I could relate, love is very strong and when you find that one who holds your heart it is always hard to let go and ALWAYS worth the fight. I enjoyed the simpleness of this poem just the way you were able to pour out your emotions. Great job.

    Also looks like P&Q kinda messed up your poem a bit you may want to go in and edit it up because one stanza looks like this..

    "You�¢ï¿½ï¿½re the one I don't want to let go"

    keep writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I feel this strong and true... Ur poems really hit my chest hard an their so heart felt an emotional :) very good 5/5

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