Nice. I really liked your ideas and questions of thought you give the reader as we read your poem. Your emotions throughout this piece are very active as you throw yourself out grasping for someone to love you and you them. I'm sure there are many people who could relate to this poem. I also liked how you kept a steady flow in the poem and how you had the rhyme scheme different in parts, creative I think. Anyway you have done an wonderful job with this poem. Great job and keep writing.