Great job =D i loved it girly =)
keep writin

--Hannah =D

I think I know what you meant by over lurks but as Britt said it is not a word, but you can just separate the 2words and it would be just fine.

Now let me not repeat the suggestions, she already gave. Tho I recommend and prefer un-capitalized form as well..

SO about the poem, REALLy it is full of passion..u had something very strong between your word choice and the usage of words.. Some lines sounded off topic but MAN some just chilled me...it had this sad atmosphere yet a challenging one.

Few changes and this would be really gd. If u are interested I can pm u which lines sounded off topic///cause other than that..I think it is really a gd piece ..

I really like this poem. I like the concept and the title. Very nice :)

So many questions and i have no answers. v.v