What a refreshing poem. I loved how you did the form and it indeed flowed like a cascade. The imagery also in this poem was really nice as it gave the reader something to imagine as they drift through the poem. You have done a wonderful job with this form and I hope to see many more from you. Great job and keep writing.

Smiles of a summer night indeed as fall makes its appearance. Nice images of that night. Good job with the form.

Wow. The imagery in this piece was so powerful and refreshing. I loved it. Every word was creative and brought this piece alive for me. Very nice work dear :] Nik

Everyone has a specialty, something they are a touch better at then other. For you it's the imagery you add to your poems, the reader feels like they are there
Excellent