A sad write and even sadder if this is true. It pains me to see hundreds of people who look at life with absolutely no meaning and also feel like they don't belong when they are really meant to be here for a purpose. Anyway to the poem I was overwhelmed by the sadness and sense of lost. The flow was descent though it got lost in parts but it still was good. The rhyming seemed forced in areas but that improves with time and skill. Great job and keep writing.

Hey, This poem is not true but the emotion is real, sometimes on bad days when my thoughts are the worst I write to make everything go away and to feel better. When you write the worst things imaginable is some what cleansing (for me anyway) Thankyou for taking intrest and leaving a comment. I took into consideration some of your comments and made some changes to the poem.
:)