Mmhhh:( This left a rahter large lumb in my throat. I don't like to read such words by you at all:(

People often say you don't know what you've got until it's gone, not true in my case, I know I love you sweet girl! Don't ever want to lose your friendship!

Beautifully written, but heartbreaking to me personally, because of how I care for you.

5/5 Ingrid

I would have to say you did a wonderful job with the contest and I am thoroughly impressed by your work as always. The meaning on the lines, seemingly etched sadness and created a sorrowfully feeling that doesn't go away in the entire poem. Your flow and rhyming were great and flawless though at times I think you might have been trying to get words to rhyme but then again we all do that. I tried picking out on stanza but found that nigh impossible as I loved every stanza. This is one of your sadder poems and I hope you get back to your lovely happy ones soon. :p Anyway you did a great job and I have to say that the repetition was to my liking. Great job and keep writing.

The sarcasm of fate, for some reason I really loved that as well... the endings of your poems just have this amazing punch to them that wow the reader and leave them left with no words. Like already stated, you don't know what you have til it's gone, it's so true. A sad write, but penned to perfection - you definitely expressed your emotions... I must say I can kind of relate to your words so it makes a lot of sense to me. Sometimes you leaving makes someone realize what they truly had...a lovely poem, I enjoyed the read immensely :)

I am again touched by your natural and innocent depth,
and your inner depth perception..

I am again touched by your natural and innocent depth,
and your inner depth perception..
and I Will Remember You.

Hallow, I think this is the best word I can use to describe this poem. Lacking in some distinct manner. Though the suggestion of emotion is strongly present, I get the feeling that you have become very numb and very hallow. Saddness and pain empty the soul. I do relate to that particular feeling. This poem is beautiful, though lacking of true emotion, though your emotion is not fake, but more forced, like you want to feel sad for something you know you should feel sad for, though deep down you feel nothing at all. I may be overstepping the simplier truths, but this is my honest opinion. 5/5 without a second guess, I hope you find hope again.

Very straight forward and to the point. Your wording was good and it was what seemed to me, a rare subject that people write about. It was nice to see something different around this joint. It was a very smooth read. Good write. Well done.

Danika
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* simply wonderful *