I love this piece!
I love the descriptions , the word choice, and the wording.

the way u separated your lines, was really effective.
The emotions are well exposed, it had this passionate tone..which I loved.

Deep, and creative, so I would suggest you to change ice-cream..to ( ice) or snow..or what ever that you find fits your message well.
>cause for a poem with this deepness, as a reader I did not like that image.

the ending line was just fantastic..so if u change ice cream..reread and see the effect :)

5/5 SURE excellent job!