Comments : The Sword and The Stone

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Interesting title. Sword and the Stone. At first I didn't understand how it tied into your people.. The sword yes not the stone. King Author is an knight. This guy was your knight.

    I really could feel your emotion all throughout this poem. You did a great job.

    You toss me to the wolves,
    to rip my flesh, and torture my soul.
    You don't allow me to be whole, completely depressed.

    ^This was a great line. Very good discriptive words. Created an amazing image in my head.

    Excellent
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    I meant to say, "At first I didn't understand how it tied into your poem.." sorry lol.