Cherry Blossoms

by Elias Fernandez   Jun 19, 2004


A forbidden fruit

Protected from all sides, yet

When bitten is sweet

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  • 19 years ago

    by Elias Fernandez

    thank you everyone! I will look into your suggestions David as thery seem to be more like what I have read in other books.

  • 19 years ago

    by David

    A forbidden fruit
    Protected from all sides, yet
    When bitten is sweet

    Forbidden fruit
    Protected from all sides
    When bitten it is sweet

    A beautiful Haiku,
    They typically dont have names, they have number.
    Look at Aken Sol's haiku's.

    Yours is very beautiful.

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