I so love this poem..such a new form, and a VERY interesting one!

I just love the word choice and the concept of this work.
I loved the images , as well as the sadness.

It takes only a creative mind to be able to relate between tears and rain that way.

poetic, coherent and highly creative.
Well done

I miss your poetry MR DARS!
5/5 SURE

Glad you are back and to echo the other commenters, I hope you don't stay away so long again. Nice work with the form and the message you gave to us. Grief and sorrow do eventually turn to peaceful thoughts, we just have to be patient. Well done.

Michael!!!!!

You posted a new poem!!!!

Aw, what a lovely work, so you, so you:)

Their tears
Drenched in sorrow

^^

Tears drenched in sorrow, yes this is so true,
such a perfect opening, you immeadiately feel what you must have felt when you wrote it, such immense sadness..

Fall like rain to the earth

^^
This had a double meaning to me, because it also shows that there is a good side in it, namely: allowing the pain to leave your system

As grief vapours to peaceful thoughts
Doves fly

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Yes, when we allow ourselves to grieve, we heal again..such a peaceful images of the doves flying:)

Thanks sweet friend, you made my day with your unique poetry:)

((hugs))

5/5 Ingrid x

I miss you:( ....I really do! I miss reading your poems, they so touch my heart!

A reallllllllllllly sad hug

Ingrid x

Very impressed with this piece. I love the Japanese style; minimal. Cinquain is a new one to me and I will try find a subject to practice it with.

Thank you, very inspired by what I have read so far and judging by other poets comments I will have more enjoyable times ahead when I revisit your page.

Hope you post more soon.

Very Nice Poem !! I Loved it