Comments : Whiskey Lullaby .

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessie

    That was beautiful, I loved the way you played on the song.

    This poem not only kept my attention, but captured my heart.

    The only criticism I have for it would be:

    ""Life is short; but this time it was bigger,
    Than the strength she had to get up off her knees."
    She loved him more than anything,
    She loved him deeper then the seas." This rhyme sounded forced, it threw off the rhythm

    Aside from that, a phenomenal job:)

  • 10 years ago

    by C0tt0nxCand3h

    Thank you.(: I'll try to do a better job next time.