This is ur best wrk........uptill nw :)
5/5
nice simple gud rhyming

Thanks :) i have a lot of hurt in this one so i guess thats probably why its the best

Hmm.......its normal .....there are always sum poems whch reflects us bst :)

Yes :) hopefully the rest of my poems will be as good as this one

They ll b better thn this ..... :)
i guarantee :)

Yay :)) lol

Hey tats y i said up till nw ........cuz evry1 improves wid time :)

And now they broke up and he is now going out with ANOTHER one of my friends.. what an ass

This read a lot like a love poem in the abab
format which conveyed your feelings rather nicely

I missed the happy ending but at least it was real

Not all can have happy endings.. actually this story got a lot worse since i wrote it..