TEARS:'(

by never again   Dec 2, 2010


The tears came
they wouldnt stop it was like a waterfall
every time I heard your name it would come
I didnt know how to make it stop
I thought I had it under control
but I didnt
every time I think about it
that day
that week
that month
I cant stop
I cant think
I cant sleep
all I know is I still love you
and I always will

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  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Scribbler

    Your emotional outlet in this poem is great. I can kinda agree with TJ, just put some rythum to your work and it would definately flourish. This is very nice though. Keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I know exactly how this feels.
    it hurts SO bad.
    love this poem tho,
    emotion just pours out
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    Hi TJ respect to your comments
    mate i understand what your
    trying to tell this person, but
    sorry theres always a but,lol

    I think this girl should let it flow
    writings either a job or a passion
    and you cannot control passion
    and raw feelings and emotion
    so write like the ink in the pens
    oxygen and its your dying breath...Paul x

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    It's obvious you write from your feelings or emotions at the moment of impact. Try thinking about what you are writing, not just emotionally but logically, with out cliche's . Be original, I think you have the talent, let it loose but take your time :-)

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