Brother or friend, it's more then painful to be betrayed in the value of caring. The emotion rules this poem one of sadness and hurt. wonderfully done

Poem spoke to me.really good! keep writing :)

I could totally relate. The pain is so much greater when betrayed my someone you consitered a brother.
Through out your poem i felt as it was me because thats exactly how it is with me.
Great job!

Awww I love this poem

Well done babii

100/100 from mee love (:

Really good..keep writing:)

This is great. I can relate to that. Good job.

Really excellent poem i have a friend who's like a brother to me :)

I think everyone can relate, betrayal by "brothers" or "sisters" happen everyday... someone you considered family will hurt you in some way or another. great poem, lots of emotion. 5/5

Great poem 5/5

This was GREAT!! KEEP IT UP