Wow, a cleverly spun tale of heartbreak. I was held by your metaphors, the images created were all too sad. When a good love goes sour, we do wish that we could turn back the clock. I honestly can't believe no one has commented on this yet. I'm honored to be the first! Brilliant work!
Take care

I thought this was an amazing write .... the image your showed us through your words was heartbraking ... everyone wishs to stay with the one they adore but was he your true love how can you be so sure . 5/5 well penned!!