by chris Dec 9, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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On a cold rainy day in november |
by Cassie Cain
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I wasnt sure where it was leading. at first i though you where going to end it with ur life the it kept going. I was a bit confused. I think you should re-write several like kindda make sure what you mean & what your emphazising on.. i wasnt sure what this poem was saying.. |