Comments : In Response To Your Rain

  • 9 years ago

    by The Prince

    I will have no second thoughts declaring you the best poet on this website. I wonder why you're not published sometimes -- there's echoes of confessional poetry in this small but well structured poem:

    'whilst I just stood there,
    like a stunned daisy'

    fantastic image, Melissa.

    And in response to your last comment on 'Circle', I don't put many poems up on here anymore but I recently posted an ode to my favourite poet, Neruda. If you've not heard of him, I recommend reading him! :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    A stunned daisy..that made me grin, he he.

    Yes, sometimes a person could leave you feeling that way.

    The poem was short, but you did describe the emotions you were going through very vividly and no doubt correctly.

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid
    ps: the downvoting fairy seems to lash out at pretty girls in particular mmmhhhh, does tell us something :p

  • Excellent. (:

  • Oh, and a big congratulations on the win.

  • 9 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    You write like thunder,
    struck, with the ferocity
    of words-
    whilst I just read it,
    again and again
    ...caught in a never ending

    You are amazing.... i keep reading this poem since last night and every time it gives me goosebumps....

  • 9 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    There is nothing more to add; the poem influenced me with it's fascinating imagery.
    Word choice and the way you managed your thoughts..
    much been said before me ..just want so congrats you for winning like I congratulated the other heros :P

    well done