I will have no second thoughts declaring you the best poet on this website. I wonder why you're not published sometimes -- there's echoes of confessional poetry in this small but well structured poem:

'whilst I just stood there,
like a stunned daisy'

fantastic image, Melissa.

And in response to your last comment on 'Circle', I don't put many poems up on here anymore but I recently posted an ode to my favourite poet, Neruda. If you've not heard of him, I recommend reading him! :)

A stunned daisy..that made me grin, he he.

Yes, sometimes a person could leave you feeling that way.

The poem was short, but you did describe the emotions you were going through very vividly and no doubt correctly.

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid
ps: the downvoting fairy seems to lash out at pretty girls in particular mmmhhhh, does tell us something :p

Excellent. (:

Oh, and a big congratulations on the win.

You write like thunder,
struck, with the ferocity
of words-
whilst I just read it,
again and again
...caught in a never ending
labyrinth.....

You are amazing.... i keep reading this poem since last night and every time it gives me goosebumps....

There is nothing more to add; the poem influenced me with it's fascinating imagery.
Word choice and the way you managed your thoughts..
much been said before me ..just want so congrats you for winning like I congratulated the other heros :P

well done

5/5