Comments : Chapter 4: Dream

  • 13 years ago

    by Rozanna

    I liked how the words flow nicely across the whole poems. Really nice. Don't we all dream of such a world? I can totally relate to this.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lost Innocence

    You have such good talent Kris.....p.s. i miss you

  • 13 years ago

    by kmx210

    I wish that I could bring the lost souls to that dream!

    I love this love. This line outlines the beauty in all the ugly darkness that war is. When one refuse to be selfish. Thank you for another amazing write.