Comments : The Burden of Being Aware

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    We go through life not knowing what is important and what we should know of until it is too late...then wish for time to go back to get things right..how true!

  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is one very beautifully written piece. Great thought shared. Something so easy to relate to and wonder if it could turn to be true :)

    all the best and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ron
    I love reading your verses. There is so much to learn and think about.

    Now, totally aware to life,
    knowledge of my existence,
    understanding who and what I am.
    I ask myself would going back,
    to being totally unaware
    with a mouth fill of milk be such a bad choice.

    I think if I had a choice I would pick the one back on my mothers breast and being unaware of anything but the feeling of total love and security.
    Awesome write!
    *hugs
    Cindy