Very visual... i like it
when ppl see a short poem, whether they'll like it or not they don't care.. so if you can get it to be short and sweet they'll eve read it again.

Good Work on this poem.. when i read it i saw Ghost Rider going down the highway lol

Short poems are good when they have good
images to go along with it. Another good read! Just one thing, this line: 'Nor here the sound' should it not be 'hear the sound'..keep penning.